Nice photo, well balanced lightning (as always) and I think it's been quite a lot retouched, especially the skin - I think you've spent too much time on the beach The eyes are perfect, too. As for a critique, why not give additional soft shading at the background? Also you can try a B&W version which would make the stripes more impressive...
It-s from the pass week.
As for a critique, why not give additional soft shading at the background? Also you can try a B&W version which would make the stripes more impressive...