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Nerd or Sherlock?

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Photographer: me
Model: me

Just another version frommy last shoot.
Maybe delete this version or move to scraps later...It's just to let you see more from the shoot!

www.palomacanorovirosa.net
Image size
536x800px 389.26 KB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D80
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
Aperture
F/3.5
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Oct 2, 2009, 10:22:34 PM
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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Beautiful technique, well executed self portrait. One of the best(as a self portrait) I've seen.

Background is lit tastefully. Clothing, (colors-toning-texture) is not bad, pose and focus seems to be accurate for this size. (and finally model is wonderful)

Few things I'd like to mention and I must say this is very subjective so no offense. (Hopefully).

This is an image supposedly blending in the beauty and the intelligence, chick-with-brains let's say, right? For that the mouth is too open, which reveals this not. 8th of an inch opening would solve that problem. Not more than that perhaps.

Glass on the (model's) right side has reflection... since everything else is executed flawlessly, this flaw grabs attention.Finally I would hide the armpit and it's form, since it's interrupting gaze.

Anyways, I've written my humble opinion, to help perfect something already perfect. Yet my "rating" of stars may not look so but here is a brief explanation.

Vision, well what is the vision here? Originality, suffers from being a self portrait with a standard pose. Technique is wonderful except for the few things mentioned about this earlier. Impact at 80 percent, but this is based on your beautiful face and not too much to do with the toning and colors and/or the graphic qualities of this image.

Anyway, thank you for sharing your beautiful self and work with us.