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Good Morning I

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Photographer: me
Model: me

Don't like it too much. I'm not happy with the resutl.
Image size
700x469px 260.91 KB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D80
Shutter Speed
1/8 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
40 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Aug 18, 2009, 11:45:34 AM
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

The matching blanket and wall is nice. It doesn't give the 'good' feel though. If there was a sun rising, you might have a shadow outlined against the wall? Think about that. Attractive model, great shot! However, the title suggests you are looking at someone, but your expression doesn't. Is it really a good morning? If you are just looking at a window, some eager anticipation of the day ahead would be nice.

We all wake up, nothing original there. Not looking like that, perhaps.

I don't know why you say you don't like it! Hair and skin are beautiful, and eyes are something worth writing home about. Unlike the other one, your hand is a good distance from your eye.

It's a cute and playful shot. Don't be coy and say you don't like it. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="15" height="15" alt="=p" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="396" title="=p (Razz)"/>